The Road to Alexander: Jennifer Macaire
Ashley comes from the future where they have time travel.
She has the chance to travel back in time to meet one famous character and
interview him. She has always had a crush on Alexander the Great so she chooses
to go back to meet her hero. She is supposed to spend just twenty hours in the
past but something goes wrong and she finds herself trapped in 333 BC.
Fortunately Alexander has taken a shine to her and she finds herself travelling
with his army, first as his concubine and later as one of his several wives.
I found this one of those books that was easy to read, but
easy to put down for quite long periods. In part, this is because the story,
though full of incident, is pretty much summed up in the first paragraph of
this review. Alexander and Ashley have explicit and amazing sex, she travels
with the army, something happens, Alexander and Ashley have explicit and
amazing sex, they travel on, something happens… You get the picture.
Part of the problem, for me, was Ashley's character. She is,
by her own account, an ice maiden. Apart from her ability to fall madly in love
with Alexander (did I mention the explicit and amazing sex?), and, later,
Alexander’s best friend/lover, Ashley finds human relationships difficult. She
is hampered, too, by the fact that she can't open up honestly to anybody as no
one must ever know that she is from the future. It is only when she finally
admits the truth to Alexander and lets her emotions show in a tearful outburst
that I begin to warm to her as a character, but unfortunately this is the
climax of the book. It does bode well for the second novel in what is set to be
quite a long series.
While Ashley is cold and aloof, Alexander is very emotional
and very open (cue lots of explicit and amazing etc etc). He is also
spectacularly good at everything and almost godlike. In fairness, Macaire does
make him a spectacularly bad singer, which we are reminded of from time to time
to give him his single human frailty. On the other hand, at one point the book
compares him explicitly to Jesus Christ, which makes him a difficult figure to
identify with, even if he’s not about to win Pop Idol any time soon.
The fact that the two main characters are respectively
detached and godlike makes for an absence of humanity at the core of the book
which is what makes it so easy to put down. At one point Ashley is captured by
somebody (it says something that I can't remember who) and held in complete
silence in a temple where she discovers that she is pregnant and has a baby
which is taken away from her. This material, which some authors would spin out
into a book all by itself, is covered in just four pages. The driving force for
much of the rest of the story is her attempts, having escaped and rejoined
Alexander, thanks to a convenient earthquake, to track down and rescue the
child. This mission keeps being interrupted by the odd conquest, battle,
betrayal and all the other incidents of Alexander’s rather spectacular life.
Thanks to this, for whole chapters at a time the reader can forget about the
baby, as, it seems, can Ashley.
The thing is, this isn't really a story about Ashley at all.
It's a story about Alexander the Great and his astonishing achievements. Like
Ashley, Macaire seems more than a little in love with Alexander and she
certainly knows a lot about him. She claims, in an end-note, not to be a
historian, but she's the only blogger I know who can post in Ancient Greek and
it's clear that she knows her stuff. Sometimes her research gets a little intrusive
(as early on, when Ashley detours into a local village for, it seems, the sole
purpose of describing daily life in a small village at the time) but enormous
quantities of historical detail are incorporated in a thoroughly readable way.
Everything from military tactics to medicine to diet to feminine hygiene
products is covered in an easy prose style. Macaire’s prose does carry you
along, free from any jarring notes. I am old-fashioned enough to think that the
quality of writing is an important element in any book and it is one of the
things that kept me coming back to this, even when a lack of sympathy with
Ashley might have made it easy not to bother.
The time and effort that has not been spent on making the
principal characters warm and human has instead gone into making the period
vibrant and alive. If you are interested in Alexander the Great, you will find
much to interest you in this book. If you like historical fiction because you
enjoy learning about daily life in the past, this is definitely a rewarding
read. There is also no doubt that if Macaire ever wants to branch out into
erotic fiction, she will be up there with the best of them, so that’s another
Overall, it's clear that I have mixed feelings about The Road to Alexander but I did enjoy
it. If you're into well researched historical novels, you'll probably enjoy it
too. I suspect that now that the characters are established and Ashley has
begun to open up as a human being (and even Alexander is becoming a more
rounded character), the second book in the series will be even better than this
A quick word about my own books
If you are a regular reader of this blog, you will know that I am just in the process of changing publisher. This means that my books are temporarily unavailable on Kindle until my new publisher (Endeavour) is ready to put them into production. Meanwhile, most of them are still available in paperback. I'll let you know as soon as the existing e-book's are back online. For Burke fans there's a special treat as Endeavour are to publish the latest (fourth) of Burke's adventures – this time during the Peninsular War